Those doors are finally closed
After waiting for the rain n sun,
Didn’t I warn you, the sun will burn you out?
And rain will tear away your ashes
Alas! I had some more time
But you see, it was not my fault,
I would have stopped,
I would have waited ,
But I didn’t see you
I was so busy living my life
That I forgot to see through yours.
About Me
- Timeless Memories - My Bygone !
- God might b wondering how i created this complicated species.... Gal with loads of principles and of course a 15th century attitude...!
Close to Heart..!
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10 comments:
quite true..
all of us are so busy with our own lives that we fail to see those in need of help..
nice work :)
Waah ji waah! Kya baat hai! :) Beautiful Ms.Pillai! :) And very true too, we get so busy in our own webs that we never seem to find out what other spiders have been up to! Eww...creepy! ;P
Nice. :)
hmmm... interesting note there...
take care mate... cheers...
@amal bose
:) thx
@ tara
:) thx tara, n good 2 c u back after ur long absence..
@Ki
:) thnk u
@Arv
:) thx arv, thnk u 4 droping by..
Very well written.. i think all of us afte a point can feel all thats in the poem... SUPERB!!
sometimes our life goes parallel to the life of those who we feel should be close to us, then we just lose them till it is too late..
good poem here :)
Nice one!
:)
Really really really well written!
lovely:)
It touched me somewhere deep ... nice !!
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